Essay Hook Audit

Get focused feedback on the opening of your Common App essay. Identify opportunities to improve your introduction, create a clearer direction and encourage the reader to engage with your story.

$49USD · one payment

Turnaround: 12 hours

Get Hook Audit

The Hook Audit looks at the opening of your Common App essay and nothing else. It is a focused review of how your essay begins, not a review of the whole piece.

If you want feedback on the full essay, including structure, storytelling and reflection, the Common App Essay Review covers all of it.

What's included

6-10 minute Loom video breakdown of your opening
3 custom alternative hooks written for your story
Next-steps scorecard with 3 specific fixes

Good to know

Covers the opening of your essay only, not the whole essay.