Common App
Essay Review
US
Common App Essay Review
Receive detailed feedback on your Common App personal essay, including its structure, clarity, storytelling, reflection and overall effectiveness. Understand your essay's strengths and identify practical opportunities for improvement.
A full review of your Common App personal essay. You get a line-by-line video walkthrough, alternative hooks and a human-written rewrite, so you can see what changes and why.
Use the feedback to revise in your own voice. The review is there to guide your writing, not to replace it.
What's included
- 15-20 minute line-by-line Loom video
- 3 alternative hooks
- Human-written rewrite of your essay, no AI
- Before and after scorecard and submission checklist
Good to know
- Rewrite is 650 words max.
- Common App personal statement only. Supplemental essays are a separate package.